Tuesday, September 17, 2024

HOW TO COMMUNICATE THAT A CHARACTER IS BLACK IN YOUR WRITING

 


Describing a character's race or ethnicity in writing can be a nuanced task, especially when you want to create a vivid image without falling into stereotypes or clichés. As an author, you want to respect your characters’ identities while ensuring that your readers can envision them clearly.

Here’s a guide on how to communicate that a character is Black in a thoughtful and effective way.

1. Use Descriptive Details Beyond Skin Color

While describing a character’s skin tone is one way to communicate race, try incorporating other features that suggest they are Black. Focus on a range of physical characteristics, such as hair texture, facial features, and body type. Instead of simply stating "Black," think about terms that describe a spectrum of skin tones like "mahogany," "deep brown," "ebony," "caramel," or "rich umber." Now, having said that, many people have a problem with using food words to describe skin color. So tread lightly.

Describe hair with more specificity. You can also describe facial features in ways that are vivid and respectful, without reducing your character to stereotypes.

2. Use Cultural Cues and Context

Embedding cultural references and experiences can help communicate a character's racial identity organically. Consider how your character interacts with the world around them, their mannerisms, dialect, or the cultural traditions they observe. For instance, you might describe how they prepare food, celebrate holidays, interact with their family, or the music they listen to.

These elements add depth to your character and allow readers to understand their identity in a more rounded, meaningful way.

3. Show Identity Through Their Perspective

Use your character’s internal thoughts and experiences to reflect their identity. For example, a Black character might think about how their natural hair is perceived in different environments, how they feel about certain social issues, or how they navigate the world. Showing how your character experiences and responds to situations differently due to their race can be a powerful way to convey identity.

4. Avoid Stereotypes and Simplistic Descriptions

Be wary of stereotypes and simplistic descriptions that can be offensive or misleading. Avoid using descriptors like "chocolate" or "coffee" for skin tones, as they can come across as objectifying or trivializing. Similarly, don’t rely on clichés or reduce a character to a set of traits that perpetuate harmful stereotypes (e.g., the "angry Black woman" or the "thuggish" young Black man). Instead, build fully realized characters with their own unique traits, motivations, and histories.

5. Consider How Other Characters Perceive Them

Another method is to show how others perceive your character. You can use the perspectives of other characters to communicate race subtly. For instance, you could describe how someone else notices their braided hair, their skin color, or how they react to societal biases. However, be careful to balance this with your character’s own perspective to avoid solely defining them by how others see them.

6. Draw Inspiration from Real-Life Diversity

Real people’s experiences are diverse and multifaceted, so take the time to research and understand the wide range of Black identities. Study different cultures, regions, and backgrounds. If you’re writing from a perspective that isn’t your own, consider speaking to people who share your character's identity or reading first-person accounts. Authenticity comes from understanding and empathy, and readers will notice when a character feels real.

7. Trust Your Reader

Trust your readers to pick up on details without over-explaining. Instead of directly stating a character’s race in a way that feels forced or out of place, weave it into the narrative naturally. If you’ve provided enough context, readers will understand.

8. Know When to Be Explicit

There are moments when being explicit about race is important for clarity or context, especially if race plays a central role in the story or in a particular scene. Sometimes it is more appropriate to state directly that a character is Black, especially if that aspect of their identity is significant to the plot or their personal journey.

9. Embrace Complexity and Individuality

Blackness is not a monolith. Every Black person has a unique experience, shaped by factors such as nationality, culture, socioeconomic background, and personal history. When writing a Black character, embrace the complexity and individuality of their experience. Avoid writing a “typical” Black character—focus instead on what makes this character unique, with a life and story that stands out in its own right.

10. Get Feedback

Finally, seek feedback from Black readers or sensitivity readers who can provide insight and perspective on how your character comes across. They can help identify areas where your descriptions may need adjustment or where you might unintentionally reinforce stereotypes.

Conclusion

Communicating a character’s race in your writing requires thoughtfulness, respect, and attention to detail. By using a combination of physical description, cultural context, and personal experience, you can create a more nuanced and compelling portrayal. Always remember to approach this task with empathy, openness, and a willingness to learn.

Here's the bottom line: Learn how to write great characters and you are golden.


Happy Writing!

Michelle Files


Michelle Files writes Mystery/Thrillers, Small Town Dramas, and Non-Fiction Books for Authors. She is also a professional copy editor and proofreader. Find her at MichelleFiles.com or TheAuthorFiles.com.


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